Saturday, September 20, 2014

Let's Play Violated Hero 5! part 17

This is the last part of my Violated Hero 5 playthrough.  If you’ve just joined and have no idea what I’m talking about, the start and enlightenment can be found here.  If you’ve been here all the way you’ll know that Violated Hero 5 is an explicit and sometimes squicky monster girl hentai game.  People offended by that sort of thing should leave now.

First up I suppose I should apologize for the rather irregular schedule.  Normally I like to update these playthroughs every couple of days and normally I’m usually a few posts ahead and can do this.  This time around I fell behind and the update schedule ended up being a little patchier than usual, especially when I’m also trying to edit and post a delayed chapter for Succubus Summoning and finish a monster 12K word short story (more on that in a couple of weeks).

Back to the game and we won.  Shiva, Goddess of Destruction showed up and Luka-clone beat her scaly ass with much imbibing of liquid fortifications.

(It’s entirely possibly I might be a little tipsy typing this up as I finished a rough Friday at work with four bottles of beer consumed within a half hour period)

I’m going to assume that was the final fight as there’s only one slot left in the CG replay menu and Dieselmine isn’t quite as sneaky as Torotoro Resistance was with the final part Monster Girl Quest.

Shiva is also surprised when Luka-clone holds back on the killing blow, especially considering the whole universe is at stake here.

Um, Luka-clone buddy, I know you’re honourable and noble and all that, but there is a time and a place and with the worlds imploding all around us, this might be a good time to accidentally trip and thrust your sword into soft bits of anatomy.  Just sayin’

At least Shiva doesn’t immediately try to murderate us like Luna-Tea and Satan did.  Luka-clone’s explains he isn’t going to kill her because she’s a victim of her curse.

She does call him stupid for this.  Destruction God on the verge of blowing up all reality, I think she might have a point.

Luka-clone does have back up as the full cheerleading squad shows up.

(You know they’re all going to fuck him senseless at the first opportunity.)

Then I’m not entirely sure what happens as machine translation starts struggling.  Luka-clone beating Shiva, in fact beating all of them, in combat has some significance.  Each of the major bosses chips in with confirmation of what Shiva said and it ends up with all five dog-piling on Luka-clone.

It’s the Happy Ending Harem scene!

I think our heroic ambulatory bag of concentrated semen is in there somewhere.

Five girls on one dude is actually a little tricky.  There’s always one poor girl that ends up being left out (unless you can get skilled with your big toe).

I’d say it was Shiva here, but I think that’s her tail wrapped around Luka-clone’s manhood.

The dialogue runs through each of the characters.  We have Satan pushing her big tits in Luka-clone’s face.  We have one hand on Shiva’s tit.  Safi is giving the shaft a good licking.  Ariel is working on Luka-clone’s balls and Luna-Tea is licking away on the glans.

Unsurprisingly, it doesn’t take much of that for Luka-clone to blow.  Then there’s lots of slurpy sounds as they enjoy his semen.  This triggers another cumplosion and this carries on until the picture is slowly whited out with cum.

Good End Game Over.

That’s not quite the last of it.  The menu screen now has an extra option at the bottom.

This takes us to an epilogue.  The worlds have been divided up peacefully between Team Good and Team Evil and humans are sort of co-existing with monster girls.

There’s still the occasional bickering.  Luna-Tea and Satan are having an argument about something my machine translator fails to pick up entirely.  Ariel unwisely gets in the middle of it and Luna-Tea finally gives her that slap she’s been threatening for most of the game.  Ariel wails for Luka-clone to intervene.  Not sure why.  I don’t think I’ve ever seen a VH protagonist do anything remotely assertive in the whole of the series.

Shiva shows up and it turns out their conflict resolution consists of forgetting about it and dog-piling on the ambulatory bag of concentrated semen instead.  Nice to see Luka-clone is still doing his bit for world peace.

And bonus harem scene.

There’s actual fucking this time around.  Shiva has ditched the snake tail and is riding away at one end.  Luna-Tea is riding away on Luka-clone’s face at the other.  Satan is giving Luka-clone’s ass a good lick.  I think she might have stuck a feeler in there as well, but at that point the art was starting to get obscured by copious cum splatters.  Safi has her big tits resting on Luka-clone’s belly.  And Ariel . . . well I guess someone has to be the fifth girl.  Sorry Ariel.

Then it’s fade to white.  Or rather fade to sort of cream/white.

And that’s it.  I hope you’ve enjoyed this playthrough of Violated Hero 5.  If you’re feeling particularly generous and would like to make a donation, may I recommend some of my books.  You’ll love them.  They’re packed full of sexy monster girl smut.

(Some people might tell you the protagonists in those books frequently meet horrible horrible ends.  Ignore them.  They’re liars.)

 I’ll give my overall thoughts on the game in a full review in a couple of days time.

Friday, September 19, 2014

Succubus Summoning 210 is up to read at Literotica

Literotica had a really fast turnaround this time.  Usually they take 3-5 days.  I submitted the new chapter late on Tuesday night and it was already up this morning.

Here is the link to the latest chapter:

Nÿte gets to have some fun this time around and I introduce a new monster girl type to play with Phil.

Currently I'm about halfway (3,500 words) through Succubus Summoning 211.  There's a snarl-up in one of the scenes I'm currently unpicking.  Not sure how long it will take to get it finished.  Hoping for sometime in October, but we'll see how it goes.

What will be out in October is the short story I didn't quite finish in time for Literotica's Summer contest.  I finished typing it up today.  It's 12,000 words and is very very hot.  I'll be entering that into the Halloween contest and you should be able to read it in a couple of weeks.

The Violated Hero 5 playthrough should continue tomorrow.  Had a big pile up of stuff happen at the same time and wanted to make sure I didn't neglect my normal writing. 

Tuesday, September 16, 2014

Let's Play Violated Hero 5! part 16

And we’re getting near the end of the Violated Hero 5 playthrough.  Barring any more twists and turns, we’re down to the last boss.  For the start of all this insanity go back to here.  Usual rules apply: if you’re underage or don’t like sex, please don’t go any further as you’re likely to see things you’re not supposed to.

Last up we finally found the missing minor boss, the darkwitch, and it turned out she had more HP than the other major bosses.  This proved no obstacle to Luka-clone and he took her down.

Did he actually win one for real this time (as opposed to previously defeated bosses getting right up after the fight and attempting to jump his bones)?  The darkwitch says his light is too strong and starts to fade into the darkness.  Ah, but as long as there’s abyss she will be reborn.  There looks to be a lot of abyss.  So no change here either.  Oh well, time to push on to Shiva.

Onto stage two of abyss and is that the silhouette of another mini-boss?

Yep it is.  Her name is Remedy and she’s some sort of witch with melty legs.  Most of the mini-boss ends so far have been more brutal than sexy.  What does Remedy have for us?

A really brutal handjob it seems.  Afterwards she takes the rare (for VH5 mini-bosses) step of not killing us.  She wants to keep us as a pet, but the text makes it clear that’s not likely to be a long life before we’re emptied out.

For the rematch I one-shot her for spite with the nice new special attack Luna-Tea and Satan gifted me.

Then it’s a straight run to the end where Shiva is waiting.  She tells us we’ve been a bit a bit slow in arriving and shows us the consequences of that.

Um, that looks bad.  At least all the annoying early bosses with their things-in-the-ass Bad Ends are going down first.

Shiva mentions this has happened before, I think.  Unfortunately we’re going to struggle for good translation here if the story gets too complicated.  Because of her curse Luka-clone has to defeat her to save the universe.  I think she wants him to defeat her but because of the curse is going to fight to the best of the ability.  As best of her ability is universe-shredding Destruction God I suspect this might be a little tricky for our heroic ambulatory bag of concentrated semen.

It’s the last battle.  I have 6 super potions remaining.  Let’s see how many zillions of HP I have to get through.

Oh.  That’s less than the darkwitch.

Oh wait.  This is going to be one of those multi-stage things.

And indeed the combat cuts out after we knock half her HP off.

Shiva says she’s having fun and all her previous wounds heal up.  The end-game harem of Luna-Tea, Satan and Safi all show up to cheerlead.  Well, they try to seal Shiva, but that doesn’t work so well so it’s back to Luka-clone.

The game thoughtfully gives an option to go back to the item screen.  This is great as I can preserve my remaining super potions by using the basic HP and MP potions to max out my HP and MP.  And round 2!

Shiva has now reached the same level as her minion with a 1000 HP.  Okay, so she absorbs damage a lot better.  Everything is doing less than 100 per hit until I unleash the tier 4 special attack and knock of about 300 HP.  This triggers interlude number 2.

Time for Shiva to take the gloves off.  She goes all glowy and then it’s time for round 3.

This time her glowiness is reflected in the artwork as her hands glow with destructive magic (this is the same picture that’s on her profile on the VH5 website).  Her HP have increased, but only to 1200.

Her attacks do a lot more damage this time.  As this is likely to be the last battle I alternate between tier 4 special attack and super potion.  About four hits later and I’ve won.  But the likely harem shenanigans will have to wait until next blog post as we always show the Bad End first.

C’mere alt!Luka-clone.

This time Ariel doesn’t sneer or run away.  Luka-clone tells her to go and save whoever she can.

Not that it’ll matter.  Shiva’s gonna blow up everything.  She tells Luka-clone to enjoy extinction with her.

Bad End scene one looks like we’re about to get a good suck.  Either that or she’s about to fry Luka-clone’s erection with lightning.

She’s a lamia type, so Luka-clone gets all coiled up in snake body first (although it’s described as feeling slimy like a slug.  Snakes don’t feel like that as any exasperated herpetologist will tell you).  She also has the long snake tongue as well.  After that’s tugged a big load from Luka-clone she takes him in her mouth for a good long suck.

Next scene and Luka-clone is all bound up in snake tail while she rubs his erection against the outside of her pussy.

Translation gets a bit tricky again.  I think Luka-clone tries to talk her out of annihilating the universe.  She says it’s impossible unless anyone can solve the curse branded to her body.

Then they start fucking.  Shiva makes Luka-clone come and then makes him watch while she destroys the tree world containing his village and presumably friends and family.

Yeep.  Even I’m not that brutal.

Horrorhead:  You can be.  Be like Brian Keene.  Let me out.  We’ll destroy a world or three.  It’ll be fun.  Let meee ouuuttttt.

And then she keeps on making him ejaculate while she blows up world after world.

So much for my theory of Shiva having so much fun playing with Luka-clone she’d be distracted from destroying everything.  I guess that brings a whole new meaning to fucking someone while something they love is destroyed in front of them.

Even though everything has turned dark we still get an interlude before presumably Shiva’s extra scene.

Shiva is disappointed the person who could have solved her curse never arrived before she obliterated everything.  Now the rest of existence is collapsing, including the abyss.  Shiva decides her last moments will be having sex with Luka-clone.  She switches to a more human form and sits astride him for one last fuck.

And they fuck, with everything going dark around them.

It turns out there is more to Shiva’s action than seeking a last burst of hedonistic pleasure.  She doesn’t want to be solely a goddess of destruction.  She also wants to be a goddess of creation.  She’s doing this with Luka-clone because she wants to conceive and when she does conceive she tells Luka-clone that this will be the next world to replace everything that was destroyed.

Everything fades to black apart from a tiny spark in Shiva’s belly.



Okay so that was unexpected.  As much as I joke about when Dieselmine gets things wrong, I’m going to have to congratulate their writers here.  They did a very good job with that ending.

Next up, the likely harem shenanigans as we check out the Good End.

Saturday, September 13, 2014

Some questions I got asked (pt 1 of a possibly to be continued infrequent series)

Another really hectic week for me.  I wouldn’t describe myself as a social butterfly, but this was one of those weeks when I was out doing stuff for most of the week.  I just about kept pace with my #DailyWriting goals.  I fell behind with the Violated Hero 5 playthrough.  I’ll give that a burst over the weekend to finish it off.  In the meantime Najmi asked me a few questions over on the MGU forums and as I thought the answers might be of interest to other people who’ve read my books, I thought I’d post the whole thing up here.

Some questions I wanted to ask you:

>Do you think the succubi you have will fit well in MGQ
(Monster Girl Quest – MEH) ? What kind of fairy tale sex fantasy do you think your succubi will fit right in, if they're inserted? (Its obviously not MGE (Monster Girl Encyclopedia - MEH) with non-violent succubi pushing for co-existence with sex and love)

Definitely MGQ rather than MGE.  This is not surprising as some of my stories have been inspired by monster girls from that game.  They would fit into most of the same slots already used in the game.  The hell-space monster girls would cater to vore and other horror fetishes.  As for the more conventional succubi—some would drain their victims to death, others would fulfil similar roles to Alice and her generals.

>Why are you interested in succubi? What do you find fascinating about the perverted demons that would sneak into houses at night, have sex with men to steal a piece of their soul and semen? Do you love the fact that they are predators of men? The concept of a man eater? Why do you write about them?

Hehe, this one’s going to be fun.

I’ve always had an interest in horror femme fatales.  Perhaps the most famous scene is the one in Dracula where Harker encounters the three vampire brides for the first time (Coppola's film version wasn't perfect, but he nailed that scene).  Later inspiration came from Wicked City, which features a few sexy-weird demon girls.  I realised later that these scenes weren’t very common overall.  Often they didn’t progress much past the sexy femme fatale luring her victim in . . . and then fanging them in the neck or transforming into something horrible and ripping their heads off.  This is because they’re horror films and are aiming to hit different buttons in the audience than porn films.

There’s also a strange quirk of psychology with vampires.  Fangs sinking into a neck is a penetrative act.  Writing graphically about sex back in Stoker’s time was much more frowned upon, so they had their filthy foreign rotters penetrating innocent young maidens with fangs in the neck as metaphor for the . . . uh . . . other method of penetration.  Of course, it turned out quite a few young women liked the fantasy of being ravished by an exotic foreign count and the vampire became a popular staple of modern erotica.

Reverse the genders and it doesn’t work as well.  Women generally don’t penetrate men during sex, so the fangs in the flesh thing doesn’t have the same psychological undercurrents.  Hammer made a lot of horror films featuring sexy female vamps, but most of the time they were chasing the other girls.  Switch the genders and you want your female predator of men to be absorbing or engulfing (The talented Trudy Cooper of Oglaf highlights and lampoons this with respect to the weapons of famous Amazons of popular culture) to tap into the same deep-running psychological undercurrents.  This is something the makers of Wicked City understood fully, but I’ve rarely seen utilised in horror since.

That’s one strand.

The second strand involves more conventional erotica.  Femdom is a turn on for me.  I also think the classic dominatrix look with either tight leather or rubber is really sexy.  But as I looked more into BDSM I found it didn’t really appeal to me.  The dom-sub dynamics seemed far more important than the actual fucking.  My fantasy was for one of those hot dommes to push me back on bed, get on top and ride me so hard my brains fell out.  The other stuff seemed like irritating distractions from the sweaty sex stuff to me.  I’d make a lousy sub.

The term for this, I believe, is topping from the bottom.  Someone is playing the dominant role for the pleasure of the person underneath, and the person underneath is the one calling all the shots.  I’ve heard this really gets on the tits of most dommes as it torpedoes the whole dom-sub dynamic.

(It’s quite possible I’ve horribly misrepresented the BDSM scene here.  I’ve always liked the clothes and trappings but once I realised I’d be a horrible sub, I never ventured much deeper.  If you think I’ve got completely the wrong idea, please drop by in the comments as I’m fine with discussing this further to clear up any misperceptions.)

And after a lot of rambling background (told you this one was going to be fun) we get to succubi.  Succubi are another alluring horror femme fatale, but one where the seduction is likely to lead to sex.  There’s no tease here.  Most interpretations of the succubus have them drain the life/soul through fucking, so a good fucking is what their victim is going to get.  They don’t necessarily have to be femdom, but if you’re shy and awkward they’re going to power right through that reluctance, get on top and ride you so hard your brains fall out.  If you’re a shy and awkward man this is a damn hot fantasy.

Ah, but what about the drained-to-death or soul-sucked-out endings, you might be thinking.  That’s not so hot and also a little creepy.

It’s a requirement for good storytelling.  A scenario where plain dude is seduced by super-hot sexy chick and they go off for wild super-hot sex is a nice fantasy but a poor story.  There’s no conflict there and no grounding.  If super-hot sexy chick is that super-hot, why is she interested in plain Joe when she could go off with the super-hot sexy stud standing right next to him?  That breaks immersion.

And then we have succubi.  She’s not human.  Her desires are different.  This fixes the immersion problem.  Why is that super-hot sexy chick banging super-plain average Joe?  Because he’s lunch.  Or because she’s looking for something else.  Nicole, one of my succubus characters, prefers having sex with nice guys regardless of how they look because they taste better to her.

Because sex with most interpretations of the succubus is deadly it also adds the conflict necessary for a good story.  There’s the thrill of seduction and the thrill or sex, but there’s also the thrill of peril.  The protagonist is in danger here.  How are they going to get out of it?  Will they get out of it?  (Okay, so in most of my stories the answer is usually no, but I do try to throw the odd different ending in to mix up things a little).

I like writing about succubi (and other similar monster girls) because they’re the perfect monster for erotic horror.  And also because they’re underused or badly used.  If they’re used in horror, it’s usually seduction followed by transformation into monster and grisly death, generally because transformation into monster and blood all over the walls has more obvious shock value than dude slowly fading away with his succubus lover giving him gentle kisses on a bed.  This misses out on some cool psychological stuff.  If there’s a clean break between the sexy stuff and the shocking stuff, the audience knows when they’re supposed to be aroused and when they’re supposed to be horrified.  If the erotica starts to blur into the horror (and there are plenty of ways to make it ickier than dude slowly fading away) then the person reading/watching starts to wonder: “Should I be aroused, or horrified by this?” “This seems creepy, why am I still turned on?”  It messes with their heads.  Clive Barker is a master of this.

If you’re writing erotica, it’s also a smart move to write about what turns you on, and succubi are a massive turn on for me.

Hmm, I knew the answer to this one was going to be long, but I didn’t expect it to be quite as long as this.  Anyone still out there?

>Speaking of Koontz, are you ever going to tell us how a fat man with bunny slippers have a legion of succubi and monster girls at his command? Is he some warlock or something?

I know his origin.  It’s connected to another one of my regular characters.  It’s not written yet, but I’m planning to put it in a future collection.  I hope it catches people off guard.

>Your settings ARE grimdark, I don't even think you have heaven or angels in them, especially H-space and Phil's setting. Are you ever thinking about merging H-space with Phil's setting? It could be interesting to see military soldiers teleported in the castle that Rosa, Verdé, Honey etc live in or the Palace of Infernal Desires.

Can’t talk too much about that ;).  There have been hints.

>When Phil was brought to the castle and Verdé and Rosa were talking about hiding him from the others, did that mean Nÿte and the succubus "pretending" to be a little girl (Can't type her name) was going to outright kill Phil if the two found trespassing humans in their domain? The little girl must be fucking ancient! Oh my god she was amazing, MEH!

That was partly a plot shift.  The original idea was for Nÿte to be the ruler of a castle with a lot more succubi and Rosa and Verdé were going to keep Phil hidden from them.  Then the story took a different path (and a better one I think).

It also made sense with the new plot.  Had Phil shown any sign of weakness with Nÿte she would have sucked him dry.  Cέrμləa nearly destroyed his mind.  Rosa and Verdé knew there was a good chance he wouldn’t survive an encounter with either and tried to delay them so they could enjoy him for longer.

>Are you actually going to have demon slayers that can fight and kill succubi? From reading a lot of your stories, the odds are HEAVILY stacked against humans. Another issue with your stories is that its so one-sided. Humans CAN'T win in your settings. Whether it be an average joe, an asshole, or a competent soldier or demon slayer, they ALWAYS lose. When you write these erotic stories, are you writing it purely for fetish and enjoyment? Sex and fetish over plot and logic? This is the exact reason why your Succubus Summoning is so popular, we finally get a man that survives (sorta) instead of die and it goes into depth about Hell and the daemons. Though, its actually a warlock-in-training 18 year old virgin that survived while you kill off highly trained soldiers and demon slayers. Perhaps you should add a soldier that survived a succubus attack and is now hunting them, make him like Phil, being a long living character. It doesn't even have to be about him losing, just him trying to save men from succubi, but he gets there too late. It doesn't make sense for Koontz and Ann to command succubi, warlocks like Phil have them as pets for personal reasons, there's an entire school for warlocks, stirp clubs are ran by succubi unknown to the public, and Earth is actually part of Hell, well maybe. You REFUSE to create a countermeasure for all this, just because it will ruin your idea of an always dominant, perverted and malicous sex demon.

Eek, long question.  I’ll break this one up.

First: demon slayers + humans not being able to fight back.  This one’s awkward.  It’s where erotica clashes with other genres.  Most of my early stories are corrupted femdom fantasies.  If the dominatrix gets beaten up at the end it wrecks the fantasy.  That’s why so many of my early stories had the succubus completely overwhelming their victim – it’s the quintessential femdom fantasy.  They won’t stay that way.  I consider myself a horror writer as much as an erotica writer and I have a lot of plans.  Some of you might have noticed connections between some of my recurring characters.  There’s a larger story taking place in the background and each short story reveals a little piece of it.

And as for demon slayers—one of the stories in A Succubus for Remembrance could be seen as the origin story of a potential future demon slayer.  Any time I have a character left in play at the end of a story I think of ways they might return in future tales (Succubus Summoning came about because of Phil’s constant knack of not being dead at the end of a chapter).  I have a few characters like this now and you can be assured that when they come up against sex demons again they will be much more prepared.

There are actually lots of countermeasures, but it’s worth bearing in mind I’m focusing on the stories that feature the sexy Bad Ends.  In them the protagonist is often lured into one-on-one situations where the succubus’s supernatural charm abilities are most effective.  Humans might be puny, but there are a shit-ton of them and if they get riled up they’re good at making things dead.  Nicole versus single dude with a normal sex drive is going to end up with the dude as putty in her fingers.  Nicole versus an angry mob equals dead Nicole.  She knows this, which is why she’s very keen to stay hidden.  Same for most of the other succubi and monster girls.  As most of them feed on sex in some way it makes sense for them to hide out within the sex industry—strip clubs, brothels, massage parlours.  Plus, as most men generally don’t broadcast to the world when they’re planning to visit a bordello to pork a prostitute, it makes it very easier for the more ruthless succubi to “disappear” them without the authorities being any the wiser.

Hell-space is slightly different as there are a lot more succubi and other demons.  But it’s hard for them to cross the barrier to get to Earth unless someone opened a gateway first, and no-one would do that because it’s completely . . . oops.

>Are the succubi in your settings born from demon parents? Or do they take the semen from men for reproduction? Or do they transform human women into succubi like in MGQ?

Varies from demon to demon.  I don’t like going too deep into the background of some characters as I think it will spoil their mystery.  While I have used it in at least one story, I'm wary of overusing transformation of human women to make new succubi.  That was where some interpretations of vampire went wrong.  Instead of being a curse it became “please bite me so I can get my fancy vampire superpowers.”  I want to avoid falling into that trap if I can.

I have examples of both, but they’re all book exclusives off the top of my head—“Arachne’s Web” and “Hugh the Hero” for getting semen from men, and “Serving the Earth Mother” for a (extremely icky) transformation from human to succubus.

Oh, I have two more questions and they are about Nicole.

>Will you write a story about Nicole encountering a demon slayer? You seem to only have her seduce nervous virgins and assholes. A demon slayer just like the one from "Slayer vs. Succubus".

I’m not sure.  I did have a very early story idea that showed exactly what lengths she’d go to protect herself and make sure she stayed hidden.  I’m not sure I’ll use it now though.  I think quite a few people are attached to that character and I remember the disappointment when I wrote scenes showing both Verdé and Amanda in a more predatory light.  I think there’s an interesting story there, just need to figure out all the angles.

>How come she's the only actual character that can let men live, but your other succubi can't?

She’s not, actually.  Quite a few of my stories have ended with the succubus (or monster girl) letting the man go for one reason or another.  A lot are typical demons—humans are nothing more than cattle to be savoured and slurped up—but even those will let their prey go if it’s in their interests to do so.  I try to give my succubus characters different personalities and different moral codes to keep them interesting.  Nicole prefers to mask herself as an escort to take regular sips from her clientele rather than having to run from place to place as the bodies pile up.  But she has no qualms about killing if she feels it’s justified.  Verdé is very nice to the people she likes, but as a succubus she will snack on the occasional person because that’s what she is.

Some stories I don’t feel the need to get any more complex than: See human, kill human in sexy manner.  For others I like to hint that there’s more going on, that the succubus isn’t killing just because she’s feeds on sex and is hungry, but because they’re following a specific agenda.  That gives a bit more depth to the stories and I hope makes them more enjoyable.

Whew, that was a lot more than I intended to write.

If you haven’t checked out my writing before and this has piqued your interest, my books can be found at these links:

If you want to try before you buy, a lot of my stories can be found here in their raw form:

For regular readers, I hope this answered some of the questions you might have had (ideally without spoiling anything).  If you have any more, email me or drop them in the comments and once I get enough I’ll do this again at a later date.

Thanks to Najmi for the questions.

Thursday, September 11, 2014

Let's Play Violated Hero 5! part 15

And we’re getting near the end of the Violated Hero 5 playthrough.  Four major bosses down, nine of the minor bosses.  That leaves us with one major boss, a minor boss (who I really hope isn’t some kind of hidden content I managed to miss) and whatever deliciously naughty scenes we get at the end.  If you want to see where it all started, the link to the first part is here.  Usual disclaimers apply: It’s a hentai game featuring lots of sexually explicit cartoons—go no further if you’re underage or a moaning prude.

Okay, so last time around Luka-clone added Team ‘Good’ to his list of conquests (not that way—this isn’t a Rance game!).  As with Satan (and most of the other bosses if we’re perfectly honest), ‘defeating’ Luna-Tea doesn’t actually equate to defeating her.  She’s about to power up to turn Luka-clone into a Rorschach smear when the throne room goes all starry and wibbly-wobbly.

This upsets Luna-Tea, who starts saying it’s too soon and she’s not ready.

Then Alice-clone with a silly hat shows up—the real Big Bad.

Luna-Tea knows who she is.  Satan doesn’t.  Alice-clone gives her real name as Destruction God Shiva.

Whelp.  If that’s not a name to run from really fast I don’t know what it.

Because both Satan and the goddess were defeated by Luka-clone, a lowly human, it means the balance has collapsed and Shiva gets to eat the universe.

Good news, Luka-clone.  You beat both Team Evil and Team Good.

Bad news, Luka-clone.  Because of that the universe is about to be destroyed.

Uh oh, I think we done a very bad thing.

They talk about more background, which I can only get snippets of because my ability to read Japanese is non-existent and automatic machine translation is only marginally better.  There was once an abyss filled with hundreds of worlds.  Shiva destroyed most of them.  It’s her curse.

Luna-Tea mentions a hidden world.  Ooh, is this where we’ll find mystery minor boss no.10.

Shiva reminds Luka-clone he is responsible for all this.  He can fix it, but it means going to her home turf and defeating her.

After Shiva leaves it’s an opportunity for everyone to cheer him on.

Luka-clone mentions the naughty ceremonies Ariel put him through to boost his powers.  Luna-Tea says that’s all lies.  Haha.  Busted, Ariel!

Oh, or maybe not.  I’m thinking this game really needs to be translated.  I’m missing a ton of story points and to be fair to Dieselmine, I think they might have put a better story together this time.

Okay, it seems like Ariel’s shenanigans actually worked as some kind of placebo.  Luka-clone must have picked up a power boost from doing the naughty with Ariel, otherwise there was no way he should have been able to defeat both Satan and Luna-Tea.

Uh oh.  Both Satan and Luna-Tea have come to the conclusion Luka-clone does get a power boost from all the naughty sex stuff.

That means there’s only one way to save the universe.  They both pounce on him and wrap their ginormous boobies around his cock.

Quit complaining Luka-clone.  It’s to save the world!

(and it looks fucken hot)

After a bit of smooshing, Luka-clone ends up dirtying their breasts.  They like the taste so much they start sucking directly from the source.

Satan says to give it all until our balls and head are empty.  Um, isn’t that defeating the whole point of this?

So after Luka-clone has been sucked dry by the big fluffy breasts and hot lips of Satan and Luna-Tea he falls over in a wizened . . .

Don’t be silly.  He’s a VH protagonist.  Their balls are literally bottomless.

All the girls wish him luck before his trip to the abyss.  Hate to point this out, Luka-clone, but you’re doomed whatever happens.  Even if you beat Shiva there’s no way you’re going to survive the attentions of this horny foursome when you return.  Then it's time to enter the abyss.

He’s not going into the abyss alone.  Ariel is coming with him (Not by choice—the goddess forced her).

And after that monstrous pile-up of cut scene followed by boss fight followed by cut scene followed by boss fight, etc. etc., we’re back to the main game board.

I 100% the last level and find out the new special attack Satan and Luna-Tea have gifted me with does a lot of damage but uses up nearly all my MP to use.

Back to the map screen and ooh look, new world.

And there, if I’m not very much mistaken is the missing minor boss no.10.

In the abyss the wandering mooks are moth girls with no arms.  The pissed-off-looking one vants to suck our blud.

At the end of the track Ariel warns us a follower of Shiva is about and then the last minor boss finally makes an appearance.  She looks very succubus-y and is wearing a mask.  She also talks about darkness a lot, which probably explains the mask.  I’m not sure what her name is, mainly because I’m not sure what the first character is.  It seems to be missing off the first 10 katakana charts I googled.  I think it’s a ‘Wa’, which would make her name something like Warumine, but I’m not totally sure on this.

I go and check the dlsite for Violated Hero 5 and find out she’s not a succubus, but a Darkwitch.  They don’t give her name in English.  This is where I also find out they do have the names of the major characters and I’ve been getting them completely wrong for the past month.  I’d like to claim this was deliberate, in the same way I always call the protagonist Luka-clone, but no, it’s me being stupid.  I forgot to check for some reason.  I was probably distracted by boobies.  Anyway, I’ll keep using the names I’ve been using rather than confuse everyone.

Also distracted by boobies is our hero, Luka-clone.  Ariel shows why Luna-Tea sent her along by slapping him out of it.  And then the fight.

It shouldn’t be too hard, she’s just a minor boss after all.  A quick check to see how many HP she has and . . .

Whoa!  Is that right?

Time to abuse more super potions.  She talks a lot about darkness and her sex feeler attack is generic black suction tube.  Once again a single super potion is all I need to quaff and that’s enough juice for me to reduce that massive HP total to 0.

Which means it’s time to yank alt!Luka-clone off the bench as our official Bad End tester.  Don’t worry, buddy.  I have a good feeling about this one.  She looks hot.

Scene one starts off with a nice bit of paizuri.  The voice actress sounds familiar.  If she’s the one I think she is we’re about to be blown by a vacuum pump.

Yep.  Many deliciously filthy blowjob sounds follow as lots of creamy cum gets sucked from Luka-clone’s balls.

At the end of the first scene Luka-clone is yanked into darkness.  This could be worrying as VH has been  relatively well restrained for a while.  Their writers must be itching to do something crazy.

No, it’s a very nice woman-on-top scene.

She says she’s going to drown him darkness.  I think she’s getting darkness and pleasure mixed up.  She rubs her pussy along the outside and then her labia puff up to a ridiculous degree as she takes him inside.  Then there’s a lot of tight squeezing and bouncing up and down until Luka-clone sprays white stuff all over the place.  Again.  And Again.  And Again.  Eventually his mind gets overwhelmed by the darkness and he forgets why he came down here.

See, I said I had a good feeling about this one.

Unless she drains us to a withered husk . . .

But no.  She takes us into the darkness and keeps us as a cum slave.  Apart from the little matter of Shiva blowing up the known universe, it’s not that bad of a Bad End at all.

Apart from the early bosses, Violated Hero has been very restrained on the whole violated bit.  There’s only Shiva left now.  Maybe they’ve been saving up all the freaky stuff for her Bad Ends.  Find out here.

Tuesday, September 09, 2014

Let's Play Violated Hero 5! part 14

Hmm.  So last week ended up being a little strange.  I was engaged in a mad race to finish a short story for a competition (and failed because the damn thing ran over 10K words) and then got distracted by the current upheaval in the videogaming community.  That’s enough of that anyway.  Time to get back to the playthrough of Violated Hero 5 (The first part is here for new visitors).

On the off chance I picked up some new readers with my last few blog posts, this warning is important:  Violated Hero 5 is a sexually explicit hentai game.  The following is not suitable browsing material for minors.  And I definitely don’t want any holier-than-thou types sniffing around for things to feed their outrage habit.

With all that out of the way, where were we?

Oh yeah, we kicked Satan’s ass.  Sweet.

Satan is a little shocked at being beaten.  Luka-clone does his usual naive hero thing of asking Satan politely to desist from oppressing the poor humans.

Um dude, this is like Satan.  The supreme evil in the universe and all that.

Oh shit.  I think she's mad about losing.

Turns out she’s not exactly “defeated” either.

At this point I got a little confused by the translation.  I thought Luka-clone might have killed her in that typical ‘the enemy I refuse to kill because of my morals obligingly leaps onto the end of my sword’ way storytellers use when they need a baddie dead but don't want their hero to actually do the dirty deed directly.

Nope.  This time it’s the opposite way around from the Safi scene.  Satan is about to tear Luka-clone apart – in the giblets and gore sense rather than the sexual sense VH usually employs.  Thankfully, Luna-Tea show up at that moment.  Or maybe not thankfully, her silhouette was on the level map as a boss fight as well.

Then it gets a bit Reservoir Dogs complicated.  Luna-Tea starts powering up to obliterate Satan once and for all.  Safi comes charging to the rescue and Ariel gets in between Safi and Luna-Tea.

Turns out Safi’s intervention didn’t achieve a great deal and we’re back to the goddess charging up to dish out Satan’s imminent obliteration.  Which leaves . . .

Luka-clone, don’t tell me you’re stupid enough to step right into the middle of . . .

Yes, of course Luka-clone, the ambulatory bag of concentrated semen and hopelessly naive hero, is going to step right between a goddess and the supreme evil of that universe.  Why not.  Sigh.

Ariel, who’s been completely terrified of Luna-Tea all game, frantically begs Luka-clone to get on his knees and beg for mercy before he ends up like Rorschach at the end of Watchmen (does that still need a spoiler warning?  Both the comic and film have been out for aeons).

Luna-Tea decides not to turn our hero into a smear of giblets and gore and offers to make him king of the humans.

That’s weakness!  If they don’t obliterate you on the spot they’re scared of you.  Get in there, Luka-clone!

. . . and fight both of them.  At the same time.  Ulp.

Um, Luka-clone buddy, I think we may have been a little rash here.

I think this is a new thing for the series.  I don’t think they’ve ever set two bosses on the main character simultaneously before (although I might be wrong as I never made it to the last sections of VH3).  It’s less intimidating that it first looks.  Neither hits that hard.  Once again the tier 2 special attack seems to do more damage than the tier 3 special attack for some reason.  Quaffing one super potion is enough to get past Ariel and another two give me enough juice to take out Luna-Tea.  It also helps that they switch to the useless sex attack at critical points in the fight.  (Ariel’s is some weird slime tube thing.  I have no idea where she’s been stashing that).

The annoying thing from my perspective is I don’t know whether I’ll need to repeat the fight multiple times to check if the Bad End varies depending on whether you lose to both, or Ariel or Luna-Tea on their own after the other is taken out.

Anyway, I use the handy boot icon (escape vs normal mooks, instant death vs bosses) to throw the fight to both.

Afterwards Luna-Tea decides not to murderate us.  She needs a puppet king and that post has Luka-clone’s name on it.  Luka-clone refuses, obviously, which means we get to see what perverted sexual stuff the goddess will use to break poor Luka-clone’s fragile little mind.

And we start with that Violated Hero favourite – a good ole cock stamping.

Hmm, if Luna-Tea’s foot is going down on Luka-clone’s penis, then where is Ariel’s stamping foot going.  Oh yeah, best to not think about that too much.


You know how if you squeeze the bottom of a tube of toothpaste . . .

No, let’s not think about that either.  Or delicate dangly parts of the male anatomy being squished in general.

They complain about Luka-clone dirtying a goddess’s foot with his semen (Hey, not our fault!) and so they get Luka-clone to clean it off.  With his mouth.

You have to watch out for the “good” ones.  They’re always meaner.

Now it’s time for scene two and . . .

Ah.  Thanks Dieselmine.  Tons of angry holier-than-thou fucks on the rampage and you give me something that doesn’t look dodgy at all . . .

I should probably remind people again that these are cartoons and the thing with cartoons is you can screw around with size and proportion to exaggerate certain things for effect.  I mean look at the size of Ariel’s foot as she tries to boot Luka-clone into Luna-Tea’s pussy.  I’m sure she was about the same size as Luka-clone when they were doing the naughty earlier.  The size changes also become more obvious when you check out the other pics below.

Generally these games try to hit a range of kinks to make sure a wide audience can find at least one scene that hammers their fetish button.  I suspect this is flirting with pseudo-incest mother-son fantasies.  The last game had Busty, the ludicrously pneumatic cow demoness, in a Bad End that also played around with size differences, as well as big breasts and lactation.  That’s how these games tend to be.  Sometimes they stray into territory that’s a little dubious by Western standards.  Personally I’d prefer it if the protagonist for VH6 was six foot tall, built like a brick shithouse . . . and still got sexually demolished by hot, big-titted succubi, but I’m guessing Dieselmine know their audience better than me.  They had me hooked at big-titted demon girls anyway.

I didn't want to say anything on this, but sensitive area, people getting wrong idea, massive outrage machine on the internet, yadda, yadda, only here for the giant demon boobies anyway.

Moving on . . .

Luka-clone gets to fuck a goddess with some help from Ariel.  I feel a little sorry for Ariel as she doesn’t seem to be getting much out of this.  Then she pulls a flogger out and starts flogging our back.

Well that’s what sympathy gets you.  Thanks Ariel, would you like to rub some lemon juice into the flayed flesh while you’re here.

So we have a sort of half-maternal, half-BDSM hybrid Bad End scene.  Luka-clone breaks after he pours most of his spirit along with his cum into Luna-Tea’s juicy pussy.

Because they’re a major boss, we get the usual interlude followed by an extra Bad End scene.

Luna-Tea talks with Ariel a bit about balance, I think.  The impression I get is that if things aren’t in balance then a scary monster girl will show up and eat all the worlds.  I’m guessing that’s Alice-clone in a silly hat and she’ll turn out to be the overall final boss (They did drop a big hint – she’s the girl on the cover of the game after all).

Afterwards Luna-Tea goes off to have fun with her boy-toy Luka-clone (who seems to have grown a foot and a half since the last scene).  Aside from a blindfold on Luka-clone this is a much more restrained scene as the amply-gifted-in-the-chest-department goddess rides him to multiple magic-induced orgasms.

Oh, and we’re not done either.

At the end Ariel shows up and complains that she’s been left out.

Does this mean?  Yes, it’s a fourth scene featuring Luna-Tea and Ariel double pussy-rubbing Luka-clone’s cock.

The scene looks a little complicated and I’m not entirely sure what’s happened to Luna-Tea’s left leg, but everyone appears to be having a good time.  Luna-Tea and Ariel take turns to put Luka-clone’s manhood in their vaginas.  Everyone gets splattered with the white stuff.

It’s good to be the king, I guess.

It's also good for me as with four scenes I can be reasonably certain the same Bad End is used regardless of which combination of Ariel and Luna-Tea is around when they defeat you.

So the rule for VH protagonists:  Lose to the later bosses and not the early ones.  (Unless it’s the psycho one at the end of VH2.  If a tail goes in your ass and carries on until it comes out of your mouth, very bad things have happened to your insides).

So we’ve beaten both Team Evil and Team Good.  I guess that leaves Alice-clone in a silly hat.  Maybe we’ll also find out where the mystery tenth boss is hiding.

Sunday, September 07, 2014

This should have been when I tell you about a hot new story, but...

This week didn't exactly go to plan.  Actually the whole of August didn't exactly go to plan, considering I was too ill to do anything for half of it.

I did have a good idea for a (loosely) summer themed story for Literotica's current story contest.  It was last minute, but I reckoned I might be able to finish it this week and get it out before the deadline of Saturday midnight.  (This is also why the Violated Hero 5 updates have been absent this week).

Then I got distracted by the #GamerGate stuff and had to hack up one of those mental hairballs just to get rid of it.

Even then I thought I might make it, until I realised how long the story wanted to be.  By Friday I had typed up 7,500 words and just needed to finish the 1st draft, type up the rest, edit it and then get it in before midnight.  Didn't seem so bad, except the rest of the story ended up running to 21 pages.  The succubus decided she was going to give someone a thorough sexual working over in this story.  It's a new succubus character, but I think people will like her.  It's also a really steamy story.  Plenty of hot succubus sex in this tale.

You won't have to wait too long to read it.  I didn't make this deadline, but Literotica's Halloween contest isn't far off and pretty much all of my stories are appropriate for that theme.  It will give me a chance to properly edit it so I don't embarrass myself with tons of typos and grammar errors.  I'll let you all know as soon as it's posted.

On the positive side, as soon as I realised I wasn't going to make it I switched back to Succubus Summoning and finished typing 210 up.  I'll edit that over the next couple of days and it should be up next week sometime.

As for Violated Hero 5, I'll get back to that tomorrow.

And for me:

Stop getting distracted by political things...
Stop getting distracted by political things...
Stop getting distracted by political things...